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Lessons taken from Obstacles
I started my personal statement on a time I had disappointment and how I manage it can you please rewrite and edit my paper to sound more interesting. I want you to build on what I wrote and expand it, to make it sound fun and enlightening, yiu may add on things that may be fictional to improve the story base , please correct gramatical and or paragraph errors. Please rewrite this paper as I understand that it needs a lot of help but this style of writing is what i was trying to achieve in my personal statement.
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The anticipation hung in the
air as our names were called one by one, summoning us into the office. We, the aspiring
yearbook editors, had meticulously crafted our applications, each question from
our teacher strategically placed like silverware on a table. As we gathered, a
tight-knit group like children beneath the variegated shadows of a parachute,
we awaited the verdict. The atmosphere in that room was charged with
expectation, akin to the buzz of vibrant colors during a game of parachutes.
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