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There has been a significant increase of poor health
care in the United States due to various reasons. One major cause is the lack
of choice in health care plans and the increased costs of care. In response,
President Obama made a plan to combat this issue under his Affordable Care Act
for basic health insurance coverage that covers medical expenses for anyone
living below the poverty level (Irvine, 2013). Furthermore, there has been an
explosive increase in people who are uninsured because they either do not know
how to get covered or cannot afford it. The US government came up with an act to
help with this problem providing affordable care for their patients, and also
the health care system of the country as a whole is being reformed to give
patients more of a choice and increase the quality of their care.
The Affordable Care Act was originally passed by
Congress and signed into law by President Barack Obama on March 23, 2010 and is
considered a major component of the Obama administration’s economic policy
influencing health care costs throughout the United States (Benoit, 2014). The
law also aims to improve quality and availability of health care and cuts down
on costs without harming the quality of healthcare (Ashrafi et al., 2014). The
key focus of this law is to provide universal coverage by using tax breaks,
subsidies and tax exemptions to cover the cost of insurance for the middle
class. The aim was, however, always to extend coverage to those who could not
afford it due to pre-existing conditions or because they made too much money.
The insurance exchanges are a nationwide marketplace where individuals can
choose between multiple plans which meet the minimum requirements established
by the Affordable Care Act.
According to
Act (2010), the law requires states to expand Medicaid coverage for those
earning less than 138% of the poverty line, and significantly reduces
restrictions on adult children receiving tax credits to improve access to
health care. The Constitution of the United States does not explicitly give
Congress the power to legislate over healthcare, but it does allow for a
provision which states that the government shall make laws necessary and proper
to carry out its powers. It is for this reason that the Affordable Care Act can
be considered constitutional (Wendt, 2014). Medicaid and Medicare are
initiatives which were taken before the Affordable Care Act, but they still
fall under the broad powers that the Constitution gives to Congress. Both of
these programs have been very important in providing care for all people regardless
of race, religion and class (Levine et al., 2013). Since the Affordable Care
Act was passed with congressional approval, these programs are now under
expanded federal financial requirements. The US health care system is the only
working nationalized system in the world. It was created through the expansion
of Medicaid and Medicare programs and aims to ensure that everybody who needs
it has access to affordable medical care.
In conclusion, one of the major obstacles to
healthcare in the United States is a patchwork of state and federal laws that
has inhibited national outcomes. There has not been an adequate amount of
funding for universal health coverage, a federal law concerning the issue could
help by providing an eligibility threshold for comprehensive care. This issue
can be further addressed by trying to reduce costs and improve quality
associated with the current system, rather than attempting to replace it
entirely. Medicaid
and Medicare health programs are examples of the federal government taking a
role in improving the quality of healthcare delivery. From a political point of
view, it is very beneficial for the American public to have insurance coverage
because not having it can limit access to specialized care, increase
out-of-pocket spending, and make the actual cost of coverage for those who are
insured much higher.
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Irvine, B.,
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