This
is a college admission essay and please, hone it
professionally for my daughter.Also, the candidate is seeking pre med
admission and there should be more emphasis on science, She talked about her
academic achievements (Diplome d'honneur, Principal's List, Speeches at
international festivals, etc), extracuricular activities (Key Club Beta Club,
French, etc) that need to be mentioned.
As I prepare for college, I am
experiencing anticipation, purpose, and enthusiasm. My high school years taught
me resilience, curiosity, love of learning, and academic skills. As an American
girl, my hardworking parents taught me to dream big and be determined. Their
inspirational journey from Chad, one of perseverance in the face of adversity,
taught me the value of education, self-control, and discipline. Having seen
their challenges, I took on responsibility at a young age, making sure my
siblings and I ran our family while doing well in school and participating in
extracurricular activities.