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Assignment will be a five-page essay based on class readings, lectures, and
discussions. This is a primary source-based, critical thinking exercise. It is
neither a research paper, nor a summary, nor a report. The goal of this 5 page
paper assignment is to help you develop and apply the kind of critical thinking
tools and techniques that scholars in a broad range of humanities and social
science disciplines use to understand the world around them. It calls on you to
develop your skills of analysis, synthesis, thesis, and argument by focusing on
historical documents that are provided to you on Canvas. This may sound odd
from a history professor, but I do not want you to research sources outside the
class materials. Why? Because this assignment is intended to make you think
carefully about a few historical documents and about the connections between
them. It is intended to make you focus on developing a strong and
defendable thesis from a limited amount of evidence. Historians never have all
the evidence they desire about their topic. They have to move ahead with always
a limited set of facts and sources. (The same is true for lawyers, policy
makers, business managers, parents, generals, and presidents.) I do not want a
paper that shows off your ability to round up mounds of information. In this
stage of technological development, that is not the challenge confronting
educated minds. Rather, the challenge lies in making sensible claims and
constructing defensible theses from available information. Therefore, I have
artificially limited the data sources available in order to stop most students’
propensity to gather more and more information, and then dump it all into a
chronology or biography of the chosen topic with little effort toformulate
their own ideas, theses, or arguments. Your destiny is greater than that. We
will go over this in more detail in discussion sections, but critical thinking
in history begins with a careful analysis of primary sources. To understand and
appreciate the meaning, bias, and value of a document or other form of
historical evidence, we must, as implied by the term “analysis”, take it apart
and examine its components. Though termed in different ways by various
historians, this means carefully considering the author of the document, the
audience for the document, the context within which the document appeared, and
the purpose of the document—in addition the actual content of the text. Doing
so with a collection of evidence (the documents we have analyzed) on a related
topic or theme then allows us to begin to critically synthesize our
materials. This is where one can gain insights through comparing and
contrasting, by looking at change over time, and considering cause and effect.
The conclusions reached after careful consideration in the analysis and
synthesis stages form the basis of a thesis. This should be something beyond
the obvious, trivial, or mundane. For more on this, read Mary Lynn Rampolla, A
Pocket Guide to Writing in History, Chapter 4 (Posted on Canvas). While a basic
science class lab report may suffice in proving yet again that gravity
accelerates an object at a given rate, insights in the humanities are more
diverse and must be effectively stated and supported. Thus, a clear argument is
important. An educated argument is not a rant, as one is often subjected to in
social media. It is a careful, logical presentation of the relevant
evidence (derived during the analysis and synthesis stages of investigation)
that support the thesis. A good argument also demonstrates consideration of
other possible interpretations, theses, or arguments that might sensibly emerge
from the evidence, but asserts why the thesis is correct, significant, or is at
least a useful addition to the topic. Follow this step-by-step process when
developing your paper.
1) Do NOT try to start by deciding on your thesis. If you were taught to do this in high school, you were mis-taught. Begin by identifying a general topic that interests you. This cannot be your thesis, because you will not know your thesis until much further into your project. You are free to develop your own paper topic based on what you find interesting in the class readings and documents. Your topic should be broad enough to encompass a range of historical documents. While not absolutely necessary, you are strongly encouraged to consult with me or my T.A. about your topic idea and document choices before you begin writing. See further below for some suggestions about possible paper topics.
2) Look for a set of documents
that relate to that general topic in the collection of documents, and not just
the ones we read and discuss as a class. You must explore and incorporate
additional documents from the U.S.
Documents pdf file I have posted at the end of our documents page and/or others
that I have placed there. Aim for collecting about 6-8 related documents total.
(Do not use outside sources without first checking with me. Otherwise, I will
presume plagiarism, fail you for the course, and report you to the Honor
Council.)
3) Carefully read and analyze each of your
chosen documents (author, audience, context, purpose), marking passages, adding
margin notes, and taking notes on your thoughts as you read. If you cannot
find sufficient information about a document’s author or context in the
textbook, use the Internet to get some help or email me or my T.A. Begin synthesizing as described
above (compare/contrast, change over time, cause and effect.). Here is where
you begin to move toward your thesis, your answer to the big-picture, “so what”
question. Make some tentative notes.
4) Begin the writing process with a “brain
dump.” (You will likely find this method useful for other classes and later
professional situations.) Set your notes, documents, and textbook aside. Get
out a pad or multiple sheets of lined paper, a pencil or pen,
and a timer. Set the timer (or the alarm on your cell phone) for 15 minutes and
start it as your pen hits the paper. Begin writing everything that comes to
your mind about your topic and documents. Don’t stop to edit, correct, or punctuate.Don’t
worry about incomplete thoughts, just write them down and ignore grammar,
structure, and paragraph breaks. No one will see this but you. Just keep
writing and thinking about all the connections, contrasts, conflicts,
transitions, etc. you see between documents and what they mean to your topic
and interests. What connections do you see to broader historical questions
about, or the significance of your topic. Keep writing, even if you repeat
yourself. If you run out of ideas, write questions about what you think you do
not know or would like to know. When the timer goes off, stop. (Of course, if
you are on a roll, keep going. But don’t turn it into anything formal.) This
brain dump method helps capture your creative brain at work, before you can
distract yourself with endlessly revising your first sentence and wasting hours
at the keyboard.
5) Set your brain dump pages
and all of your other materials aside for a day, which should include a sleep
cycle. Your brain will be processing while you sleep, shower, exercise.
6) The next day, don’t look at your brain dump pages. Instead, carefully re-read your documents and your relevant textbook, lecture, and discussion materials. Seek answers to the questions you recall having during your brain dump. Look again at the document collection and see if there might be another, more appropriate document you should include in your analysis/synthesis. Make new notes and marginalia in your documents if new ideas come up (they likely will). Revisit your analysis of the author, audience, context, and purpose of your documents. Then set your 15-minute timer and do a second brain dump.
7) Set it all aside for another day and sleep cycle.
8) The next day read through
your two brain dumps. Among the grammatical mess you will see your original
insights and ideas. These will point you toward your thesis. Circle valuable
ideas, passages, and fragments. From this seeming mess, you can now begin to
apply the structure necessary to craft your thesis and to outline the argument
or body of your paper.
9) Now you can begin writing your paper. You
can sketch an outline, but don’t be tied to it if your writing develops new
ideas. Don’t forget to acknowledge and speak to possible counterarguments or
other possible interpretations. When you have a complete draft, look at your
topic sentences in each paragraph. They should relate the paragraph’s subtopic
and discussion to your thesis. Look closely at your conclusion. You will likely
have stated your thesis more clearly,
more convincingly here, since
you now have carefully presented your argument and evidence. If so, move that
stronger thesis into your introduction and revise or tailor your paragraphs and
topic sentences to align well with it.
10) Set your almost finished paper aside for
another day/sleep cycle. Read it fresh, or have a qualified friend read it for
typos, unclear sentences, poor word choice, etc. This is the point at which to
seek help from the Writing Center on structure, grammar, and style if you are
uncertain of your skills in these areas. Then, turn it in and relax in a manner
of your choosing. Paper mechanics: The paper must be typed, double spaced, and
stapled, five-pages in length (not counting title page or grading rubric). It
is due in discussion the day for which you sign up. A 5 point penalty will be
imposed on papers turned in after the end of discussion on your due date and
will accrue at 5 points per 24-hour period after that time—including
weekends, holidays and snow days. Most of what you will be writing about
happened long ago, so use past tense verbs, unless otherwise appropriate to the
context of your sentence. Use 1-inch margins (like this syllabus uses), a
standard font, numbered pages, and no block quotes or quotes over 4 lines long.
Footnotes, endnotes, and "works cited" are not necessary. When citing
documents or the textbook, follow the quote or paraphrase with a parenthetical
reference in the following format: (Author or title of document, source, p. #).
For example: (Benjamin Banneker, Canvas, p. 24); or (Resolution of the Boston
Carpenters’ Strike, US History Documents, p. 261). Multiple references or
quotes from the same document in a single paragraph should be cited once at the
end of the paragraph. When citing the textbook use the following format:
(American Horizons, p. 121). You do not need to cite class lectures or
discussions. Include an unnumbered title page with your name, your thesis as
the title, and the day your discussion section meets. Plagiarism (handing in
another's work as your own) or cheating will not be tolerated. Any such conduct
will result in a grade of "F" for the course and referral to the
Honor Council. Attach a blank copy of the "Grading Rubric for GHIS 225
Papers" (below and on Canvas) to the back. Staple all parts together at the
top left corner. Turn it in on time. You must also deposit an electronic
version on Canvas. (Please do not include the rubric in your Canvas upload.)
When grading your essays we will look for the following:
• A strong, clear thesis statement.
• A clear, logical argument supporting your
thesis.
• Effective choice of documents and accurate
interpretation and use of them to develop your argument and support your
thesis.
• College-level writing skills
(e.g., grammar, style, and
presentation). Some helpful hints: avoid first person voice, avoid passive verb
structures, use appropriate verb tense (if it was said, written, or occurred in
the past, use past tense.)
• Read the grading rubric for more
clarification, or ask me.
• Have someone else proof-read and correct your paper before turning it in