I am attaching the feedback on my presentation about the same topic. Consider the points mentioned here while writing. The presentation as a whole could have been more thoroughly underpinned with content from the module or your own research, more theoretical ideas could have been included to advance the depth of conversations. In addition, in your subsequent essay do consider the potential benefits of digital landscapes entering bedroom landscapes. Is it always bad? You can of course conclude that this is overwhelmingly negative but must enter the debate and try to see multiple sides before reaching a conclusion. A good presentation with plenty of content and a need to create a more underpinned, more balanced argument in the essay.
From
the second part of the twentieth century onwards, the increased
child-centeredness of family life has been linked to social notions that
youngsters should have their beds. Indeed, in Europe, it is typical for
youngsters to have their. Parents frequently desire their offspring to own
their bedroom, even though they might not afford to do so by holding a
large enough house. Despite their seeming contradictions, these themes reveal
how scholars have attempted to comprehend the opportunities and restrictions
that characterize children's lives. Children's Geography and Childhood Studies
have been chastised for under-emphasizing structural limits(Ramsey & Wang,
2021). While some parts of this literature review will show that this appears
to be an exaggeration, this chapter will argue that studying children and young
people's relationships and relational processes can provide insight into not
only how children form and maintain intimacies and identities but also how
seemingly micro-events are linked to larger structures(Ramsey & Wang, 2021).
Therefore, understanding the role of the bedroom and the technological
components therein is pertinent to understanding children’s trust in modern
times.